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Marked mature for obvious vampire violence and some language ^^;

And at last, it's finally finished :faint: I can finally cross one fic off of my list :XD:

OMG FIGHT SCENES :faint: This chapter took so long to get just right, I really hope it turned out ok because this is my favorite part and I really wanted it to be perfect. I'm personally not entirely happy with the ending, but I hope I wrapped up everything ok. There's still a few loose ends to tie up, but they'll be taken care of in the epilogue.

Just a few notes I feel like I need to point out:
:bulletred:Fane's dialogue in some places (the two short monologues he has right before the real fight and when he's holding Basil) are inspired by lines from the Dracula novel by Bram Stoker. I drew a lot of inspiration from the original Dracula for Fane's character so it seemed fitting ^^
:bulletred: Maria actually made an appearance in Chapter 15, and the slave (his name is also Damien, but Fane calls him Ferka to make fun of him) that Fane used as a live shield made an appearance in Chapter 16.
:bulletred: Pay VERY close attention to Damien Talbot (not the slave, the smug sarcastic guy) in this chapter... he's been a minor character so far but he'll play a much bigger role later... and that's all I'm gonna say because SPOILERS

I also owe a lot of thanks to:
:iconmimmime: for keeping me "motivated" and for helping me write the first scene when Amber wakes up
:iconcherlnida: for the scene where Amber stabs Fane with the stick (my sweet little OC needs to get her hands dirty :la:
:iconnightmagican: for reading all my WIPs because I was so excited about sharing this and couldn't wait to get it finished :XD:
And thanks to all 3 of you for beta reading it for me and helping fix spelling/grammar errors or confusing points ^^

Basil, Dawson, Ratigan, and Miss Kitty (c)Eve Titus and Disney
Amber Mus, Fane cel Rau, Adrianna, Alexander Janssen, Maria, and Damien Talbot (c)Me
Damien Ferka Sorena (Fane's slave) (c)mimmime

Previous Chapter: Chapter 17
Epilogue: als123.deviantart.com/art/Echo…
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MaddySwan5926's avatar
Such a sweet ending to such a epic and fantastic fanfic!! :)
I loved every moment of it!! The action, suspense, romance, everything!! This was amazing!! Your a amazing writer!!
I cant wait to see what you plan on writing next, because this was fantastic!!